Are Your Words Meshing With Your Client?


Andrea MacDonald

As writers, we are forever practicing our craft and honing our skills.

Hearken back to those days of early learning, though, and it’s amazing how much more we can do.

For example, communicating clearly may seem like a no-brainer to folks like us. Compose your message, send it to your audience, and the meaning is received exactly as you intended.

Like telephone inventor Alexander Graham Bell and that famous call to his assistant Mr. Watson.

But instead of a clear reception, we’re met with a lot of static. Or confusion.

Here’s an example:

I was driving in downtown traffic recently when I spotted a huge billboard. In big bold letters, the slogan read: “Nothing’s better with peanut butter.”

Wow, I thought. That’s odd. Peanut butter doesn’t improve the taste of any food at all? Not even a jelly or jam sandwich? After all, a PB&J sandwich is a classic in most places.

Many miles later, it dawned on me. They weren’t dissing PB; they were saying nothing is better with peanut butter than their product—milk, which was shown in the image but wasn’t actually mentioned in the copy.

It may have made more sense in a magazine ad or online, when there’s more time to make the connection. When you only have a few seconds to grab your reader, however, the message must be unmistakable.

Now I’m sure this client probably spent thousands of dollars on its ad campaign. Maybe even set up a focus group.

Yet it unintentionally confused the audience. Somehow I doubt I was the only one who stumbled over those words in the rush of the morning commute.

It’s kind of like that famous saying, “no news is good news.” We know it doesn’t mean that all news is bad news, but did we really understand that the first time we heard it?

When we cross over into another field or platform, it’s even easier to miscommunicate our intentions.

Like I did.

While speaking with a new client recently, I mentioned twice that I was willing to do research for the blog posts I would write for her. Both times she nixed the idea.

Then I clued in.

When I’d brought up the subject a second time, I could almost see the dollar signs popping up in her eyes. For her, research meant too much time spent on one small project. That meant more money out of her pocket.

Talk about a misfire!

To me, my plan to do research conveyed an eagerness to learn more about my client’s needs so I could deliver the best possible product. To the client, my words meant something else indeed. It was an important lesson and one I won’t soon forget.

See how important is to be crystal clear in your communications? Not to mention tailoring your talk to your audience.

You’ll save yourself a lot of grief by researching your prospect and platform before you dive in.

AWAI has tons of resources on how to do that, but, speaking as a former journalist, my top tip is to interview people in the industry.

It’s kind of like the informational interview you hear so much about in HR circles. You’re not looking for a job; you’re looking for useful material.

Harness the power of social media to find someone you know (maybe even a friend of a Facebook friend!) in the field you’re after and interview them. Not for an hour … even five minutes will do.

If the word “interview” is too daunting, just ask this person a few questions about their top priorities. When you can start speaking the same language, you’re well on your way.

While you’re at it, read up on the lingo and view online discussion groups. You’ll save yourself some big missteps.

Stick with me this week and you’ll be more productive by following the steps outlined in each article.

Action step: Read a slogan or headline and figure out at least two different ways the words can be interpreted. Please share your comments below.

Tomorrow we’ll tackle math, using numbers to quantify our output as writers.

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Published: November 16, 2015

6 Responses to “Are Your Words Meshing With Your Client?”

  1. I found this article very thought provoking. My comment is on headline:
    The General Store That Fits In Your Mailbox

    First: From this I get, there's a lot of coupons advertising products that come packaged in a clear mailing pack, which fits in my mailbox.

    Second: There's a building; replica of a General Store that's small enough to fit inside of my mailbox.

    The reality of course is that, it's a catalog called "Country Store".

    Guest (Cynthia Purnell)November 16, 2015 at 6:59 pm

  2. recently I was driving past a Baptist church located on a busy highway near where I live .. they have an electronic billboard out front .. as I drove by at 40 MPH a message flashed up on the sign .. I glanced over an read "visit us at www.Rapist.org" .. on the way home I purposely drove slowly by the sign and read "visit us at www.RHBaptist.org" (Rolling Hills) .. always drive by your sign at 40 MPH to see what your drivers actually see

    Guest (Tom)November 16, 2015 at 8:17 pm

  3. Instead of proving the possibility of proper writing we should be considering how to communication across class and races, and genres without grading. Rather many educational institutions believe in critiquing and analysis each pupil's writing to develop their skills without deliberately separating model of correction and righteousness. So, please consider the practice of differentiation education for the including of art and craft to be practiced throughout the lifespan, not just for vocational or career endeavor. Thanks.

    Guest (Allen Tompkins)November 16, 2015 at 10:32 pm

  4. A recent prospect in the clean water industry I was interviewing has a tagline to their corporate name --- it read, "Water Doctors Recommend".
    We had an interesting conversation about the tagline, and how it might be awkward or confusing for some people. While keeping the same structure, we discussed changing the font size or color on WATER, their primary product, to reflect the natural emphasis and to eliminate any potential awkwardness or confusion.

    Terry - StuartFLNovember 17, 2015 at 7:36 am

  5. "Low Rate Credit Cards"
    -Golden1 Credit Union

    Is this talking about the interest rate or the quality of the credit card? The ambiguity will not harm Golden1's excellent reputation but it may reach out to those who have suffered a loss of credit rating due to the great recession, whether intended or not. "Low Rate Credit..." are loaded words.

    BikingInOrangevaleNovember 17, 2015 at 12:57 pm

  6. No bigger the misfire of mindful "crystal clarity" than the slogan: "A mind is a terrible thing to waste."

    When they finally fix that to say: "It's a terrible thing to waste a mind," I'll consider it. Meanwhile, mind your own mindlessness.

    Guest (Chris Morris)November 19, 2015 at 11:32 am


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